... in Werewolves of Montpellier. It was supposed to come right after the page where Audrey and Sven get drunk, showing their hangover, but it didn't really achieve the effect I was hoping for. So I took it out and rather put back in the umbrella page that I originally had taken out, finding it a bit too cute, but then liking that and thinking it sort of could have been an outtake from Breakfast at Tiffany's.
Synes selv sekvensen hvor Sven og Audrey kommer fulle hjem og rommenes fysikk blir snudd på hodet, er en av de mest interessante øyeblikkene i boken. Og den fungerte jo bra alene, uten ekstra sider.
ReplyDeleteDet var det jeg ogsaa kom fram til, at denne siden egentlig ikke tilförte noe.
ReplyDeleteWell, the umbrella page is much better. Good choice!
ReplyDeleteI really love that you post these unpublished pages. Your pacing is always immaculate; the economy of each book so well-measured, that I always find it fascinating to see which ideas ended the cutting room floor (and why).
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Thank you, JJS and People!
ReplyDeleteJason, this page is incredible; I love that shaky line! I like when you post your original French pages, so I can brush up on mon français
ReplyDeleteThanks again. I like the page - in theory! Or the intention behind it. It just didn't work.
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